My current unedited WIP I'm working on. What y'all think?
He drunk the whole bottle and wiped his mouth. He closed his eyes feeling a glorious high. Dirk opened his eyes and wiped the sweat from his neck. It was hot as hell out here. Just then he saw a woman jog by he couldn’t take his eyes off of. She had caramel like skin, brown short hair, short, and thick. She was wearing shorts that showed her caramel toned legs and a t-shirt that showed her c cups. She wasn’t big or small and had plump ass. He salivated just looking at her or more like gawking at her. Dirk jogged in front of her. She took out her headphones and asked “can I help you?” He noticed her pretty black eyes and high cheek bones. They looked like they could see his soul, which he hoped not. There was a light sheen of sweat on her forehead, there was no wind today. “Is there a store around here?” he said. She gave him you stop me for that look but said “yes, around the corner.” “Thank you so much” he said showing off white pearly teeth. “My name is Dirk. What’s your name?” he asked. She smiled back and said “Monique”. He thought to himself her smile was so sexy. “Well I’ll see you around Monique”. He gave her that smile and started jogging the trail.
Monique didn’t realize she was starting at him and smiling as if memorized. She thought he was cute. Wonder if he’s married or has a girlfriend. He looked so good with his shorts and a shirt that showed off his pecks. His showed off his muscular chest, there was a splash freckles everywhere, and green eyes. Dirk had red hair you want to run your hands through, a chiseled jar, and plump lips. Then she shook her head of the thoughts and put her earphones back in and ran the trail. She listened to jazz while running. It soothed her mind. Monique jogged and thought about the numerous texts she got from her ex. He claimed he wanted to see her, that wasn’t a good idea they always argued when they were in the same place and she didn’t feel like that. She thought about this one time they argued about a woman constantly calling his phone. This woman called as soon as he would get home. Of course he denied knowing her but she just didn’t pull the number out the air. One of the many reasons they broke up. Then she cleared her mind and let the jazz take her away. Monique felt better and light. She jogged faster, and did two more laps in the park. Hoping to run into
Dirk again but she didn’t. He must have left she thought. Monique decided to go home. As she was walking someone came up beside her. She jumped. It was Dirk. Where did he come from she thought? “Hey I wanted to ask you a question” Dirk said. “You scared me and I thought you went home. Ask away”. He smiled and said “I’m sorry if I gave you a fright.“ Can I take you out tomorrow?” Monique thought about it blushing. “Yes” she said smiling. “Great” said Dirk with a wide grin. “I will pick you up at eight”. “Ok” said Monique. She gave him her address and number, he jogged off.
Monique thought what will she wear? I haven’t been out in a while. Monique went out with her girls now and then but that’s different. Just then she got a text, she checked her phone and the text read I miss you. She rolled her eyes and knew it was from her ex James. Monique put the phone back in her pocket and put back on her headphones. She continued to jog home smiling. Not even James could ruin her mood right now. Monique couldn’t wait to get home to call her best friend Shawna. She had so much to tell her. Monique got home fast, she lived right down the street from park. It’s been a year now that you lived there. James and her use to live together. When they broke up she left. They picked out the apartment together but she didn’t need the memories. Monique went to take a shower. She was in there a little longer than usual thinking about Dirk. She got her phone from her bed and dialed Shawna. “Whats up girl?” Shawna said. “I got a date” said Monique. Shawna said “spill.” “He has red hair and freckles everywhere” . “Freckles?” “Yes and they look delicious” “I’ll take your word for it” “He is so muscular.” “Where did you meet?” asked Shawna. ”He asked me for the nearest store”. “You know I know here like the back of my hand” said Monique. “You should, you have been in Charleston for seven years now, even though you left and came back.” “I’m sooo glad your not in Florida anymore and you’re here with me” said Shawna. “Me too” said Monique. “So did he ask you out?” “We actually have a date tomorrow but I don’t know what to wear” Why don’t you wear that cute blue dress with the heels.”
“Thanks bestie, good idea.” “You know I got you. Make sure you try them on tonight.” “I will.”. They talked some more and they hung up. She immediately went to her closet and got out the blue dress. Monique tried it on and looked in her mirror sitting on the dresser. She turned left and right, then turned her back to the mirror. Satisfied she changed back into her comfortable clothes. Monique walked to the kitchen and opened the refrigerator. She pulled out her favorite wine. Poured some in the cup and took it to the living room and sat on her loveseat. She turned on the tv and watched her show, Law and Order. Now on her third glass of wine. Monique yelled he did it slurring, guilty. Monique made the intro sound. She heard a sound but saw nothing, she shrugged and turned back to the show. The episode ended and she went to bed, her glass empty. She staggered to her bed and fell in it. She took her pillow and said take me Dirk. She put the pillow to her chest. Monique heard a sound coming from her window. She scrunched up her face and narrowed her eyes but saw nothing so she turned her her head. She looked at the wall, her eyes began to cross then she fell asleep. She was woken by her alarm. She had to do a few hours at work. She is an accountant. There was an account she needed to finish up. Monique got up and got dressed. She locked up her apartment and went to work. It’s been six months she been there and liked it. Monique got in her car and got to work in fifteen minutes. Haley said “hey”. Haley was a girl she worked with, mixed with freckles, skinny and was nice. Monique said “hi” and walked over to her desk but stopped by Haley’s desk which wasn’t far from Monique’s desk. There were only a little of people there. “What you doing here?” asked Haley. “Finishing up my accounts”. “Me too girl.” “Let me get to work” said Monique.
Monique walked to her desk. She pulled out the account she has been working on. Monique opened the folder and rechecked everything. She was crunching some numbers when a shadow came over her desk. She looked up and saw Mr. Mills standing at her desk. “Mr. Mills you didn’t have to come down. I would have called” said Monique. “I just wanted to check on my account.” “Didn’t I tell you to call me Darren.” “Yes Mr. Mills, I mean Darren” she said with a smile. That smile Darren thought. She is so beautiful. He put his hand over hers and said “no problem, darling.” Monique pulled her hand back and said “I’ll call you when I’m done.” “Looking forward to it, ” he said while drawing his hand back. He turned and walked away. He was Latino and had hazel eyes, he looked good but looked too much like James. Haley ran over once he left. “Mr. Mills is so sexy.” “You know he likes you.” “I don’t date clients.” “He won’t be a client for long.” “I guess not.” “You better jump on that before I do.” “He is all yours.” “Really?” “Thanks girl.” “Im going eat his fine self up.” Monique laughed and Haley walked back to her desk. It was seven, time for her to go. She went to her car and Mr. Mills was standing by it. “Umm what are you still doing her?” Asked Monique. She looked at him expectantly. “I was wondering if I could take you out tonight?” “Sorry but I have a date tonight.” “Cancel it, ” “I promise you won’t regret it.” “Sorry I can’t” Monique got in her car and drove off. Darren was Latino with hazel eyes, he was cute just not her type. Close call she thought. Aggressive aren’t we? I got to be more careful with him thought Monique. She got to her apartment and hurried and changed. So much time was wasted with Darren. Monique got dressed and headed out.
Dirk drunk the last of the remains in his cup. He took the cloth and wiped his lips and threw the rag in the laundry. Dirk walked towards his room stomach full, he had two rare hamburgers, and planned to eat light tonight. He got dressed in a blue shirt and black pants. Dirk checked his reflection in the mirror. It was empty, he wondered why he always hoped for one, to feel normal he guessed. Dirk shrugged his shoulders. He laughed to himself remembering being outside of Monique’s window. He tried to be quiet but lost it when she put the pillow to her chest and saying take me. Dirk laughed so hard but when she looked his way he immediately quieted. He knew he looked like a creep but he had to see her. Right then he heard a knock at the door, he went and answered the door. As soon as the door was open she said “aren’t you going to invite me in?” “Please come in Angelina” Dirk said.
She looked around and said “so this is where you choose to live?” “It works for me” She scrunched up her face. Angelina was tall, had brown hair, skinny, pale, and was annoying.
waved her handkerchief at the place and said “I don't know how you gave up the luxury of the palace for THIS ” she says with a disgusting look on her face while looking around. “Was there something you needed Angelina?” his voice laced with agitation. He didn't need or ask for her approval. “I just wanted you to know we found you” she said with an evil smirk. “Thanks” he said guiding her to the door. “Okay, okay I'm going but we're watching you.” “Thats nice” he said and closed the door. They sent her over to let him know they found me he thought. How did they find me? It’s been years. I can’t go back I won’t. He just wants to control me. He wants me to kill people I don’t even know. Dirk’s face was in scowl.. He heard glass breaking and looked down to see the cup in his hand, there was a broken cup with blood streaming down his hand. He licked the blood off his, hand.
His father was the main of the “they” she was talking about. His father was very old school and believed he should arrange Dirk’s marriage and I should take over once he dies. Life was scheduled there. Dirk’s schedule was planned out everyday. Wake up, wash, court a woman I didn't know, kill just because the king said so, I felt horrible after some of the killing. Everyone didn't deserve to die but if he wants it done its done. No discussion. He would make me court a different women everyday. Again no discussion. He would shove women in his face throughout the day, only ever our kind.
He had two trusted advisors and Angelina was one, the other was Marcus and not nice. It started as a teenager. Angelina would tell him how handsome he is. Dirk ran away a few years ago. He managed to evade them for four years. Just when he finally felt normal. Dirk had decisions to make but he will make them later. Right now he had a date with the beautiful Monique. He got ready for his date, trying to push the thoughts to the back of his head. Dirk got dressed and couldn’t get Monique out his head. Dirk daydreamed about her big luscious lips that were begging for his kiss. Smooth looking skin that pleaded for his touch. Eyes that looked like they could see into your soul and a ass that wanted grabbing. Dirk got hard thinking about her. He tried to push down his erection and think about something else cause when he thought about her he wanted to grab his erection and get release. Dirk couldn’t help it, he
grabbed the jar of vaseline off the dresser and got a rag from the bathroom. Dirk sat on the bed and thought about Monique’s sexy smile and started going up and down his cock. He envisioned those perfect c cups and went faster. He let out a grunt. Dirk thought about kissing all over her supple skin and let out another grunt. His face twisted in pleasure. He thought about laying kisses on her ass and that was the kicker. Dirk let out a moan with his release.
He cleaned up his self and went to his bathroom. Dirk washed his hands and called Monique. She answered on the third ring. “Hello?” Damn she sounded so sexy. He cleared his throat and said “Hey, its Dirk .” “Oh hey what’s up?” “Just wanted to make sure you didn’t forget about our dinner tonight.” ”Im getting dress as we speak.” “Good.” “I know you will look sexy in whatever you wear.” He said in a low voice. “Is that so?” she said. “Yes, I can’t wait to see what you got on.” “Well let me finish getting ready and I will see you later” she said in a sultry voice. They said their goodbyes and hung up. Dirk went on the bathroom and got another rag.
Monique decided she needed another shower. Her body felt on fire and her panties were soaked. She ran to the bathroom to take another shower. Monique only had on panties and bra so she didn’t have much to take off. Naked she turned the shower on and tested the temperature with her hand. Once it was to her liking she got in. Monique grabbed her favorite body wash and lathered her body. When she got to her breasts she massaged them like she thought Dirk would. Monique circled her chocolate nipples and groaned. She gave her other breasts the same treatment. Monique closed her eyes to the sensations. She slid her hand down her stomach and grabbed her thighs. Dirk’s hands were her hands. Monique thought of him caressing her thighs. Then she slid her hands between her legs. She circled her clit and made a loud “o” sound.